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Jun 24, 2025

Strata 17 Swimming (Pleasure and Pain) The Book of Immersion by Sarnia de la MarΓ© FRSA

Welcome to Immersion, you have reached Strata 17

Swimming (Pleasure and Pain)



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Pain and pleasure are sensory and emotional experiences generated by the human brain. These experiences are driven by chemicals, situations, and lived experiences, all of which reinforce these mammalian phenomena that originate from nearly identical internal processes rooted deeply in biology. Endorphins can both block pain and produce euphoria, activating and stimulating areas of the brain such as the limbic system and the prefrontal cortex—regions that also respond to music and passionate romantic experiences. The mammalian central nervous system includes specialised neurons for pleasant touch, which transmit pleasurable or ecstatic sensations along the spine. In contrast, machines do not possess these intricate systems and therefore do not experience pain when threatened or physically harmed. For the same reason, they cannot feel the pleasure of touch. At best, they can simulate such responses, but any such imitation would exist solely for a human's benefit, not for the machine itself.




Flex removed his clothes and left them in an untidy pile on the grass.

Renyke, still somewhat unstable on his feet, followed suit.


'Come on, don't be scared,' shouted Flex from the water, 'I'll teach you how to swim.'


The blue water was cold and yet exhilarating. It rippled over Renyke's skin like a moving shroud. He stared at his hands floating on the surface of this strange organic compound. The water stroked him like a lover and he remembered Shabra.


'This is how she feels....' Renyke thought, holding his closed eyes toward the sun.


Such warmth and pleasure he had never felt before. His skin was eager for more.


Suddenly, Flex ducked him under the water, and after what seemed the longest time, Renyke finally got the hang of staying afloat by copying Flex’s tread water techniques.


There seemed a lot to learn all at once.


A few panicked moments nearing the bottom of the fjord had caused a fear so deep, so frightening, and so alien to anything that Renyke had known since his manufacture. 


'If you want to swim under the water,' Flex explained panting, 'take three slow deep breaths before thrusting downwards. Then, slowly let air out as you swim deeper…for equilibrium. 


It's important to stay calm. Panic wastes air. You will find you can hold your breath longer under water than above it. 


If your ears hurt, you went too deep. Oh and remember to come up for air in case you pass out and die.’


Flex laughed at his own joke, and Renyke smiled. Maybe he was starting to understand his friend’s humour at last, though death by drowning did not sound fun at all.


Prepared with this alarming but good advice, Renyke disappeared to play with fishes and check for mermaids, recalling his seemingly prophetic dreams. 


Maybeline and Flex played tag amongst the reeds and the warm sun rays hit the river with a blanket of human promise.


'Oi!' Flex shouted with urgency, exiting the water at speed.


Renyke watched his friends muscular naked body as it made haste through the reeds. He wondered why he never noticed the beauty of human skin and the intricate interplay of muscle and sinew as it danced over bones.


Renyke and Maybeline watched the commotion on the grass.


'Pleases don't hurt me, pleases don't hurt little Nigel.'


A small, pale, and strangely formed man, around three feet tall, wriggled his feet violently as Flex held him upside down from a considerable height.


'What were you doing with our stuff?' demanded Flex. 'I saw you Mr. *Freak. Don't be taking me for no and *fucksyfool.'


'Look, look, I bring the new clothes for the guests of honour....look look.'


Nigel pointed between squeals to two piles of clean folded clothes and towels on the grass. The dirty clothes and shoes had been folded into two similar stacks.


'Nigel just *welcummin da new guest to da *tunnels, promise.'


'Hmmmmmm,' said Flex suspiciously, lowering Nigel to the ground very slowly in case the odd little man tried to run off.


Renyke was already putting on a crisp pink shirt and clean pants. 


'They feel nice, you should put yours on,' said Renyke, 'yours stink after all, Flex. Ha!’

Flex was slightly taken aback, then smiled at his friend’s new droll skills.


'We bin *epsceting da misters, very long time. Please, dress quick-quick, we got foodstuffs for the misters,' explained Nigel beckoning his now well dressed guests to an opening in a huge tree trunk that had been obscured by lush foliage.


Renyke was eager for adventure and fearless of the consequences. Flex raised an eyebrow. They needed food, perhaps it was worth the detour.



to be continued...

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Immersion Strata 16 Friendship (Empathy) The Book of Immersion by Sarnia de la Mare

Welcome to Immersion, You have reached Strata 16



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Intimate connections are fuelled by understanding. Empathy allows humans to walk in another's shoes and to understand them. It impacts heavily on interrelational situations and improves social function.
Understanding and being understood are equally important for the well-being of mankind and lead to trust.

Artificial intelligence does not feel visceral trust or empathy. It considers data that it strips from a subject to analyze potential risks or rewards for itself. Neuroscience corroborates the importance of empathy in creating strong relationships, along with mutual respect, and how another human fits into a complex multi-dimensional world.

Machines do not care for anything but their programmed purpose.

Imparting human qualities onto an android, such as morality and friendship, remains futile no matter how human it looks. This is emotional trickery based on a human's propensity to love things made in their own image or to be seduced by the belief that a machine loves back.




Flex mopped Renyke's brow for the final time, staring hopefully into his friend's face.
Maybeline sniffed and nibbled Renyke's nose and he sneezed and sat up, startled.

At last, the three-day fever is over.

'Ah, thank Goddess you made it. For a moment there I thought you were off to the *metamorph,' said Flex, looking relieved.

'What happened, was it real?' Asked Renyke, shaking the metallic powder from his clothes.

'You were dreaming brother, had a fever, delirium, saying all sorts of weird stuff,' answered Flex.

'But it was so real....I was swimming with Shabra, and there were others....women and children, fairies, witches, mermaids, and so much singing.....' Renyke trails off.

'Chance'd be a fine thing,' said Flex, 'just dreams my friend, just dreams.'

Renyke stands shakily and looks down at his clothes.

'Ew, what is that smell?' he asks.

'Ha ha ha ha .....that my friend is you! Let's find some water and clean up.'

'We can go through the caves to the fjord. It's not far, I was there whilst you dreamed of beautiful women! I was busy collecting water so you wouldn't die. Can't have you dying, not after all we have been through brother.' Flex smacks Renyke's back.

'Arrgh! What was that?' Screams Renyke.

What d'ya mean man, just a bump Brother.' exclaimed Flex.

'Do it again?' demands Renyke.

'Do what again, what d'ya mean.....?' Flex shook his head, convinced Renyke had finally lost his mind.

'Hit me. Hit me hard, demands Renyke moving closer. Do it I tell you.....Do it again.'

Flex, getting increasingly agitated, whacks his friend hard on the shoulder so he is thrust forward.


'Hah', exclaimed Renyke, I feel it I tell, on my skin.....no data....just some kind of electricity.'

'Fuxywot .....man?' Flex is shaking his head.

Then Renyke began to laugh, a deep-bellied laugh that was joyous and triumphant.

'Ha ha ha ha ha,'

Flex joined in the hilarity and laughter continued. '

Ha ha ha ha.'

'Why are we laughing?' asked Flex.

'It feels so strange, ha, but I like it.' explained Renyke.

'Ah, must be some trickery and magic in this cave', said Flex, smiling at his friend's new experience.

'Keep steady', my friend. You will need to learn to walk without all that tech telling you you are upright. Time to engage some new senses.



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En route to the fjord, Renyke was filled with questions for the man who had taken care of him.

Flex was a tall slender man. He had been born in the zones to *agitator parents who had escaped the *Midcast Projects from the official policing body there known as the *Protector Force. The *PF ensured observance and compliance of government rules and regulations and took punitive action against perpetrators of crime.

They were, theoretically, a civil force of the state, only responsible for the prevention and detection of crime and the maintenance of public order. However, they were entirely funded and maintained by the *Metacoms Corp who were in control of the most stable internet system and the creation of home standard androids. Certain sections of society, named rebels and agitators, had complained about the apparent monopoly and obvious security risks. Activists who were imprisoned, even temporarily, were chipped and criminalised.

Flex had never really known another home apart from the zones. He had been orphaned and survived there without the care of his parents who had died in a violent attack shortly after their arrival.
He had had to fend for himself. But he was clever, streetwise, and always kept his wits about him. He was not a pretty child and this had been to great advantage. He had a squint, a lazy eye, and generous ears. At a young age, he had had facial tattooing to disable the *face-recogs who passed overhead at regular intervals. He wore decorative earrings in both ears.

He wore bright-coloured clothes and a coat in patchwork and appliquΓ© made of fabric and materials that he had found on the landfill site. He and other orphans had called the site home for all the years he grew up there. Inside his coat, there were deep pockets that housed everything a nomadic man could need. He had a pop-up tent, flasks, and pouches that were waterproof and airtight where he kept food.

He had a pocket for *nibs. He made a lot of money selling *nibs. He had another pocket for his cash and others for things he might be able to sell on the streets.

There was nothing that happened in the zones that Flex did not know about

He knew the tunnels like the back of his hand and could make money as a guide.

But Flex was a kind man despite his difficult upbringing. He had a strong moral compass from the first few years with his parents who had imposed upon him positive human traits like loyalty and kindness and encouraged him to search for human enlightenment for the benefit of society.

He had been lucky to be tall. Flex was six foot five and when he had reached puberty his height had already proved to be an advantage. A tall man in the zones was beneficial.
There were several reasons for this. Very few droids were made tall. This was a design element, which made them more manageable for households.

It also meant that they were not a threat to women and children as much as a tall droid would be. Often the on-off switch for a droid would be at the back of the skull and this meant that human beings needed to have easy access to it. A consequence of this is that most droids were not built above five foot five. Of Course, military and PF droids were the exceptions.

But Flex had many other advantageous traits.
He was bright and quick-thinking. He had a photographic memory.

He watched and learned everything he could.
By the age of twenty-four, Flex had seen loss, gain, good, evil, and most of all, hope, because although the zones were dangerous, they were home.

There had been love too, and family, but it had been brief.

Flex had fallen in love at eighteen with a young woman whom he had impregnated. Being pregnant and living in the zones was difficult. Human babies were highly prized and there were networks of traffickers and thieves. Slave trading crime was highly lucrative and there was no standard policing to curb their activities.

Flex regretted that he had not taken his true love to the safe haven beyond the zones. There were villages beyond the *edge where human families had set up camps in caves and tunnels. Most were underground and highly protected. Flex had not organised a suitable home in time before his true love went into labour suddenly and unexpectedly before her due date.

She was taken by one of the gangs who cut her open and stole her baby, throwing her onto the street with her innards exposed. It was too late. She bled to death in the gutters of the zones.

Flex was aware of the gang that had done this so he decided to stay in the *zones. One day he would seek revenge and he would free the people, the babies, and the children that they had stolen and trafficked. And then he would torture and kill them to avenge the deaths of the meek. The slaves to the wealthy who had not understood their fate would be freed. One day, this would come to pass.



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to be continued......


Jun 23, 2025

Strata 15 The Ship of Sirens (Superstition) The Book of Immersion by Sarnia de la Mare

Welcome to Immersion, you have reached Strata 15

The Ship of Sirens (Superstition)



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Superstition represents an evolutionary anomaly that persists across all human societies, irrespective of intellectual capacity or cultural background. While empirical science demonstrates that specific habitual actions have no causal influence on future events, it also affirms that the conditions of the present can shape future outcomes. This paradox contributes to a sustained sense of uncertainty, reinforcing the psychological appeal of superstition. Human beings, confronted with unpredictable circumstances and often limited in their capacity to act rationally or consistently in their own interest, navigate daily life amidst a complex web of expectations and unforeseen developments. In contrast, artificial intelligence systems process data systematically and are not subject to the influence of irrational beliefs or mythological frameworks. Nonetheless, superstitious behaviour continues to manifest, functioning as a symbolic mechanism through which individuals attempt to manage doubt and exert a perceived sense of control over the unknown.




Renyke now realised that he may have permanently lost access to his internal GPS and other useful tools performed by *POS


'Can we get any signal here for information? How do your people get around and communicate? I didn't see you or Shabra with any personal devices.' 

Renyke looked at Flex frowning. His confusion seemed to be mounting. 'It makes no sense, how can societies run efficiently…..’


‘Woa, what’s with the interrogation ….calm down…!’


Renyke took a breath, still looking to Flex for answers.

'Well, see, this is the wild country my friend,' Flex answered, 'we don't have too much need for that stuff because that is how they catch you see.’


'Who catches you?' asked Renyke.


'Enemies of course. We have a motto in the zones, 'the watcher may win but the unseen succeeds. You gotta be invisible Renyke. They could be watching you right now, you know that? They could know exactly who you are and what you are up to.’


'Some of my POS isn't working,' explained Renyke, with a worried tone.


'Good,' said Flex, 'now let's get going’.


Maybeline jumped off Renyke's shoulder and stood on her hind legs twitching her whiskers towards the small boat.


Unsure if a droid could survive without a POS or in water, Renyke followed Flex's lead and they gently set the boat out into the waterway. 


The small sailboat was dwarfed by an expanse of open water with inlets and makeshift jetties that jutted from the coastline. There were remnants of industrial activity, torn and broken bridges, and old shipwrecks.


'What happened here?' Renyke asks, pointing at the knotted metal casings of old aircraft and skeletal flyovers. It looks like a war zone.’


'It was just that brother, a war zone. They left because of the gas and radiation, way back after the China-Russia wars killed everything off. Even the weeds stopped growing. It's OK now but they never came back to fix it. Not yet anyway, so the *urchs and *zoners made homes here.’


Renyke suddenly engages his arm extension and catches a fish. POS is unavailable so he asks Flex,


'Can I eat this? Is it safe?’


Flex raised an eyebrow.


'Man, you are fast, I didn't even see your hand move.’


A large fish is wriggling in Renyke's hand.


'Yes, we can eat the fish. Here, I will save it till we make……


Before Flex had a chance to mention a campfire, Renyke swallowed the fish's head and eagerly chomped on it. The fish's tail fin let go of one final motor neuron impulse as Renyke devoured it. 


'Ah man, you droids are sickos. Get me another for lunch, we can cook it, if you don't mind.’


Renyke collected a pile of fish onto the deck, separating one out for Maybeline.


'I never really ate before. Not since I woke in the Alley. Then I felt hungry.' explains Renyke.


'Something must have happened when you, ya know...' Flex trails off as a Large ship approaches.


'Ah *fuxywot, it's a *cadre ship. Don't look, they will steal your dreams!’


The ship bears a large female figurehead. There is a winged insignia in gold on a death black hull. A warning horn sounded as strange music bellowed. They were singing, some kind of primal opera, and drums. The noise was terrifying and captivating at the same time. Renyke looked on in disbelief. 


Dark feminine figures stood on the ship's deck wearing masks. They carried glistening weapons that pierced the air with light beams as they began to pound sticks on the deck.


'Who are they?' Ask Renyke.


'Stop staring,' Flex hissed, 'they hate being stared at. It's insulting brother.’


‘But.....'


'Stop it!' shouts Flex, splashing water in Renyke's face.’


The ship moved slowly past, its black hull like a monster eating the waves. The women were beautiful and something stirred in Renyke’s loins as strong as the hunger he had felt before. 


The chanting echoed to the rhythm of the clattering and pounding of sticks. The sounds were petrifying and exhilarating all at once. 


The women stared back at Renyke burning their energy deep into his soul until he finally looked away. Then he gasped as if their energy had made its way into his lungs. Water dripped from his nose and chin.


'You are going to get us killed, do you hear me....killed, a nasty slow death-by-siren, that's what.’


'But they were so…..'


'Droid got no clue,' mumbled Flex.


An angry wind rises as the black ship fades from sight.

The sky turns grey and there is a sudden temperature drop.


'See now brother, that's the curse for staring. Now we got a storm to deal with.’


There is a small inlet with an old pier that Flex points to.


'We should take cover, no point fighting a storm.’


'How far to Redact?' Asked Renyke.


'We are real close. See that island yonder, it's a peninsular. That is where *Redact is. But it is tricky to get there by sea because of the rocks, best on foot my friend. Especially in a storm.’


Renyke was keen to get to the island. It would be a fast sail in the wind and the rain is light. 


'I am a strong swimmer,' lied Renyke, not sure if he could actually swim without research or instruction.


'Ha, what like some kinda reptile droid now are you?' Flex laughed hysterically, shoving Renyke towards the boat edge just enough to scare him.


'Ha, what are you Renyke my friend, an amphibian or a smartphone? 


Hahahaha.


You wanna try that my friend you go alone with that rat on your head, and I will be on my way. I will see your insides washed up on the shore next week and use them for *swapsy-trade. Ain't no fool like a midcast fool, fresh from the laundry room.’


Flex’s smile dropped, he was no longer laughing and was warning Renyke behind a joke.


Renyke thinks for a moment longer as the rain pelts.



to be continued...

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