sarnia de la mare

Sarnia de la Mare FRSA

Artist • Composer • Educator

Sarnia is a multidisciplinary artist and founder of Tale Teller Club . Their immersive work blends art, sound, and story—exploring identity, transformation, and the beauty of otherness.

As a Fellow of the Royal Society of Arts and founder of the Sarnia de la Maré Academy of Arts, they empower creatives to think radically and create fearlessly, whilst seeking truth.


Showing posts with label novels. Show all posts
Showing posts with label novels. Show all posts

Jun 24, 2025

Strata 17 Swimming (Pleasure and Pain) The Book of Immersion by Sarnia de la Maré FRSA

Welcome to Immersion, you have reached Strata 17

Swimming (Pleasure and Pain)



abstract swimming book cover underwater
Pain and pleasure are sensory and emotional experiences generated by the human brain. These experiences are driven by chemicals, situations, and lived experiences, all of which reinforce these mammalian phenomena that originate from nearly identical internal processes rooted deeply in biology. Endorphins can both block pain and produce euphoria, activating and stimulating areas of the brain such as the limbic system and the prefrontal cortex—regions that also respond to music and passionate romantic experiences. The mammalian central nervous system includes specialised neurons for pleasant touch, which transmit pleasurable or ecstatic sensations along the spine. In contrast, machines do not possess these intricate systems and therefore do not experience pain when threatened or physically harmed. For the same reason, they cannot feel the pleasure of touch. At best, they can simulate such responses, but any such imitation would exist solely for a human's benefit, not for the machine itself.




Flex removed his clothes and left them in an untidy pile on the grass.

Renyke, still somewhat unstable on his feet, followed suit.


'Come on, don't be scared,' shouted Flex from the water, 'I'll teach you how to swim.'


The blue water was cold and yet exhilarating. It rippled over Renyke's skin like a moving shroud. He stared at his hands floating on the surface of this strange organic compound. The water stroked him like a lover and he remembered Shabra.


'This is how she feels....' Renyke thought, holding his closed eyes toward the sun.


Such warmth and pleasure he had never felt before. His skin was eager for more.


Suddenly, Flex ducked him under the water, and after what seemed the longest time, Renyke finally got the hang of staying afloat by copying Flex’s tread water techniques.


There seemed a lot to learn all at once.


A few panicked moments nearing the bottom of the fjord had caused a fear so deep, so frightening, and so alien to anything that Renyke had known since his manufacture. 


'If you want to swim under the water,' Flex explained panting, 'take three slow deep breaths before thrusting downwards. Then, slowly let air out as you swim deeper…for equilibrium. 


It's important to stay calm. Panic wastes air. You will find you can hold your breath longer under water than above it. 


If your ears hurt, you went too deep. Oh and remember to come up for air in case you pass out and die.’


Flex laughed at his own joke, and Renyke smiled. Maybe he was starting to understand his friend’s humour at last, though death by drowning did not sound fun at all.


Prepared with this alarming but good advice, Renyke disappeared to play with fishes and check for mermaids, recalling his seemingly prophetic dreams. 


Maybeline and Flex played tag amongst the reeds and the warm sun rays hit the river with a blanket of human promise.


'Oi!' Flex shouted with urgency, exiting the water at speed.


Renyke watched his friends muscular naked body as it made haste through the reeds. He wondered why he never noticed the beauty of human skin and the intricate interplay of muscle and sinew as it danced over bones.


Renyke and Maybeline watched the commotion on the grass.


'Pleases don't hurt me, pleases don't hurt little Nigel.'


A small, pale, and strangely formed man, around three feet tall, wriggled his feet violently as Flex held him upside down from a considerable height.


'What were you doing with our stuff?' demanded Flex. 'I saw you Mr. *Freak. Don't be taking me for no and *fucksyfool.'


'Look, look, I bring the new clothes for the guests of honour....look look.'


Nigel pointed between squeals to two piles of clean folded clothes and towels on the grass. The dirty clothes and shoes had been folded into two similar stacks.


'Nigel just *welcummin da new guest to da *tunnels, promise.'


'Hmmmmmm,' said Flex suspiciously, lowering Nigel to the ground very slowly in case the odd little man tried to run off.


Renyke was already putting on a crisp pink shirt and clean pants. 


'They feel nice, you should put yours on,' said Renyke, 'yours stink after all, Flex. Ha!’

Flex was slightly taken aback, then smiled at his friend’s new droll skills.


'We bin *epsceting da misters, very long time. Please, dress quick-quick, we got foodstuffs for the misters,' explained Nigel beckoning his now well dressed guests to an opening in a huge tree trunk that had been obscured by lush foliage.


Renyke was eager for adventure and fearless of the consequences. Flex raised an eyebrow. They needed food, perhaps it was worth the detour.



Jun 18, 2025

Mastering Book Cover Design for Amazon & Kindle: A Practical Guide

I can't believe I have written so many books!
Finding my writer's groove with the Book of Immersion and other titles as been a real learning curve so here I will share some tips for other keen novelists.

Book covers Amazon Kindle

Book Coverss Amazon Kindle Selection

In the crowded world of self-publishing, your book cover is more than just a pretty picture—it’s your first impression, your marketing powerhouse, and the visual hook that can make or break a sale. Whether you're publishing a paperback on Amazon or a Kindle eBook, designing an effective cover is essential. Here's how to make sure yours stands out in the crowded Amazon marketplace.

Why Your Book Cover Matters

You’ve heard the saying, “Don’t judge a book by its cover,” but let’s be honest: readers absolutely do. On Amazon and Kindle, your cover shows up as a thumbnail alongside hundreds of others. A compelling design can make readers stop scrolling and click—while a dull or unprofessional one may get overlooked entirely.


Key Differences: Kindle eBook vs. Paperback Cover

Before you begin designing, understand the format you're creating for:

  • Kindle eBooks: Require only a front cover. It should be optimized for digital screens and look good at small sizes (thumbnail view).

  • Paperback Books (KDP Print): Require a full cover including front, back, and spine. You'll need to factor in the trim size, page count, and bleed areas.

Amazon provides a Cover Calculator & Template Generator for paperbacks:
https://kdp.amazon.com/cover-calculator


Design Specs for Amazon & Kindle Covers

Kindle eBook Cover Requirements:

  • Dimensions: Ideal ratio is 1.6:1 (e.g., 1600 x 2560 pixels).

  • Minimum size: 1000 pixels on the shortest side.

  • Maximum file size: 50MB.

  • File type: JPEG or TIFF.

  • Color: RGB only.

Paperback Cover Requirements (KDP Print):

  • File type: PDF for print.

  • Resolution: 300 DPI.

  • Color: CMYK.

  • Bleed: Typically 0.125" on all sides.

  • Spine width: Depends on page count and paper type.


Design Principles That Sell

1. Know Your Genre

Each genre has visual cues. Romance uses soft, emotional imagery. Thrillers often use dark tones and bold fonts. Non-fiction covers tend to be cleaner and typography-driven. Look at the top 10 books in your category for inspiration.

2. Typography is Crucial

  • Use no more than two fonts.

  • Title should be readable at thumbnail size.

  • Avoid script or decorative fonts unless genre-appropriate.

  • Author name can be smaller but still legible.

3. High-Quality Images

Avoid using pixelated or stocky-looking images. Invest in high-resolution assets or create custom illustrations/photos. Sites like Unsplash (free) or Shutterstock (premium) are great sources.

4. Balance and Hierarchy

Design with clear visual hierarchy:

  • Title first

  • Subtitle second (if applicable)

  • Author name third

Leave breathing space. Don’t overcrowd.

5. Thumbnail Test

Shrink your design to 100 x 160 px. Can you still read the title? Is it still eye-catching? This is how it will appear in Amazon search results.


Tools for Designing Book Covers

For DIY Authors:

  • Canva (Free & Pro): User-friendly with KDP templates.

  • BookBrush: Designed for authors, with genre templates.

  • Adobe Express: Quick designs with good typography options.

For Professional Designers:

  • Adobe Photoshop or InDesign: Full control for advanced design and print-ready files.

  • Affinity Publisher: A powerful InDesign alternative.


Using Amazon KDP Cover Creator (Optional)

If you're not comfortable with design tools, Amazon’s built-in Cover Creator is simple and free. It has templates, font controls, and lets you preview in 3D. However, it’s limited in customization, so it's best for basic layouts.


Avoid These Common Mistakes

  • Using low-res images or blurry graphics

  • Centering everything by default

  • Overuse of effects like drop shadows or bevels

  • Inconsistent visual tone with the genre

  • Misaligned spine elements on paperbacks

  • Ignoring bleed and trim lines


Pro Tip: Hire a Designer If You Can

A professionally designed cover can significantly boost your credibility and sales. If you’re serious about publishing, consider hiring a freelance designer from platforms like Reedsy, 99designs, or Upwork. Always provide your book's genre, blurb, tone, and any visual references you like.


Final Thoughts

Your book cover is a visual handshake with your reader. On Amazon and Kindle, it's your billboard, brand, and storefront rolled into one. Invest time and care into it. With the right tools, creative direction, and an understanding of what sells, you can design a cover that attracts, engages, and converts browsers into buyers.

Book Series Strata Amazon Kindle

fly book cover pink

The Book of Immersion : Volume 1


green underwater swimmers

Strata 17: Let's Go Swimming (Pleasure and Pain) (The Book of Immersion 21)

gold leaf lovers abstract art

Strata 16: Friendship (Empathy) (The Book of Immersion 20)


hippy mind

The book of immersion : Strata 15: When Sleep Comes (Dreams)


book cover kindle

Strata 14: The Journey to the Edge (Fear of Death) (The Book of Immersion 18)


green catrtoon


Blink Friction Interactive : No 1


Blink eye book cover


Blink Friction 1




yellow black book cover

Rat Gang Crew and the Overgrounders (Rat Gang Crew and Friends Book 3)


watercolour hippo book cover

Toddle Poddle: Issue 2 (Rat Gang Crew and Friends)
Kindle Edition

Free on


or £4.71 to buy
Other formats: Kindle EditionPaperback



monochrome book cover


Strata 14: The Journey to the Edge (Fear of Death) (The Book of Immersion 16)



elder, mature lady, champaigne


Elderescence: A Manifesto (Elderescence Academy Book 2)



artistic book cover

Tea Cup Shorts: V1


monochrome abstract book cover

Strata 13: The Fight (Hormones) (The Book of Immersion 17)


sewing book cover

Handmade by Sarnia, Eco Winter Warmers: Elderescence Academy: Recycled Fashion


Book of Immersion book cover

Strata 12: Shabra and the Basement People (Emotions) (The Book of Immersion 15)


dinfant book cover

Quick look
Strata 10: Dinfant Trouble (Synthetic Love) (The Book of Immersion 14)

Other formats: Kindle Edition



skull pink wallpaper

Strata 11: The Crossroads (Guessing) (The Book of Immersion 12)


child robot

Strata 10: Dinfant Trouble (Synthetic Love) (The Book of Immersion)


adam and eve apple

Strata 9: Limerence (Loins and Lust) (The Book of Immersion 13)


fruit orange bodie


Feminism, AI, Big Tech, and Societal Issues: Navigating the Nexus (The Humanitarian AI...


character book cover

Strata 8: Shabra (Laws of Attraction) (The Book of Immersion)


fly book cover

Strata 7: Jarome and the Scritters (Trade and Barter) (The Book of Immersion)



May 9, 2025

What makes a good story? The things you need to know before you start writing that novel



"The Universal Thread: Elements All Good Stories Share"

Introduction:

Stories have been an integral part of human culture since time immemorial. From ancient myths and legends to modern novels and films, storytelling is a universal language that transcends boundaries. While each story may have its unique plot and characters, there are certain elements that consistently make a narrative compelling and unforgettable. In this blog, we'll explore the common threads that bind all good stories together, weaving a tapestry that captivates audiences across time and cultures.

Relatable Characters: At the heart of every memorable story are characters that resonate with the audience. Whether it's the hero's journey or the anti-hero's redemption, characters with depth and relatability draw readers or viewers into the narrative. Flaws, struggles, and triumphs make characters authentic and evoke empathy.


Engaging Plot: A well-crafted plot is the backbone of any good story. It's the roadmap that takes the audience on a journey, filled with twists, turns, and unexpected surprises. A balance of conflict, resolution, and rising action keeps the audience invested, eager to discover what happens next.


Conflict and Resolution: Conflict is the fuel that propels a story forward. Whether it's internal or external, the challenges characters face create tension and drive the narrative. However, it's the resolution of these conflicts that satisfies the audience, providing a sense of closure and fulfillment.


Emotional Resonance: The most memorable stories evoke a range of emotions, from joy and laughter to sorrow and fear. Emotional resonance is what connects the audience to the narrative on a deeper level. It's the reason why certain scenes or lines from a story linger in our minds long after we've finished reading or watching.


A Sense of Universality: While stories may be rooted in specific cultures, times, or places, the themes they explore often transcend these boundaries. The universal aspects of love, loss, courage, and the human condition make stories relevant to diverse audiences around the world.


Effective Pacing: Pacing is the rhythm of a story. It involves the careful balance of fast and slow moments, allowing the audience to absorb information, experience tension, and savor climactic scenes. Well-paced stories maintain the audience's interest and prevent them from becoming either overwhelmed or bored.


Thematic Depth: Beyond the surface narrative, good stories often delve into deeper themes that provoke thought and reflection. Whether exploring morality, identity, or the nature of existence, a layer of thematic depth elevates a story from mere entertainment to a work of art.


A Memorable Setting: The setting of a story serves as its backdrop, creating the world in which characters live and events unfold. A vivid and immersive setting enhances the overall experience, making the story more memorable and transporting the audience to new and exciting realms.

Conclusion:

In the vast tapestry of storytelling, these common elements serve as the threads that bind diverse narratives together. Whether through the trials of relatable characters, the twists of a well-crafted plot, or the emotional resonance that lingers, good stories leave an indelible mark on the human psyche. As storytellers continue to weave their tales, understanding and embracing these universal elements can guide the creation of narratives that stand the test of time.